Don’t use 200 words when only 100 are needed. The longer it takes to deliver an argument, the less persuasive it becomes.
The best way to make your audience feel you’re speaking directly to them is to use words like ‘you’, ‘your’ and ‘you’re’. To continue the financial adviser example, instead of saying “A lot of married couples fear not having enough money in retirement”, you might say: “If you’re like a lot of married couples, you’re probably worried about not having enough money in retirement.” This kind of personalised writing is one of the most effective copywriting techniques around, because it really engages readers.
Robert Keith Leavitt, a famous advertising copywriter, once said: “People don’t ask for facts in making up their minds. They would rather have one good, soul-satisfying emotion than a dozen facts.” That doesn’t mean facts aren’t important (they are); rather, it means facts alone are unlikely to persuade your clients. So our financial adviser should feel free to mention that 62% of Australians aged 65 and above are forced to rely on the age pension, according to the Australian Institute of Health and Welfare. However, what would really grab his clients’ attention would be if he told them how devastated they’d be if they couldn’t afford to get private health insurance or buy their grandchildren presents.
Facts tell, stories sell – especially emotional ones. Our financial adviser would really cut through if he was able to not just warn clients about being unable to afford insurance or presents, but told true stories of real-life couples in those situations. The reason case studies make such persuasive marketing content is because we unconsciously identify with characters in stories. We imagine ourselves as the grandparents who couldn’t afford to buy a Christmas present for their granddaughter; that makes us sad, and more willing to take action to prevent the problem.
Amateur writers often make multiple requests of their readers – buy now, book a call, tell a friend, subscribe to our newsletter. By contrast, the best copywriting services in Australia make only one request at a time. That’s because they know your clients may feel confused, or even overwhelmed, if they’re asked to do too many things. Calls-to-action are good – just make sure you limit yourself to one per marketing piece.
On a related note, your calls-to-action need to be easy to understand and easy to execute. “Book a call” is clear and – assuming the link takes the reader to a booking form – simple. But if the call-to-action is “Research your finances, calculate how much you’ll need in retirement and get in touch if you discover a shortfall”, many clients either won’t understand what they need to do or won’t bother.
The reason so many property and finance businesses invest in copywriting services in Australia is because they know that persuasive marketing content attracts clients. But it’s hard to do writing that drives sales if you don’t understand what effective copywriting techniques look like. That’s why you should partner with a specialist content writing agency, like Hunter & Scribe, which aims to be one of the best content writing services for mortgage brokers, buyer’s agents, accountants, financial advisers and other property / finance professionals. We know how to write content that will appeal to your target market and make you look like a trusted expert.
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