The research is in: people who speak plain English are considered smarter than those who use corporate gibberish.
Need proof?
Here’s a strategy statement by ConfusedBank*.
“‘One ConfusedBank’ is an integrated, customer-centric business model that enables customers to choose any of the Group’s products, services or brands, assisted by navigation and selection tools that deliver the best possible solutions to meet their needs.
“ConfusedBank’s strategy to leverage its strategic assets of Cost, Capital, Culture and Customer remains, however we have sharpened our focus on elevating the customer.”
Any idea what that means?
Now if ConfusedBank had asked Hunter & Scribe to write their strategy statement, we would’ve written:
“At ConfusedBank, you can mix and match out products and services to suit your needs.”
Our version is not only much simpler, it’s also smarter, because it’s comprehensible.
The research mentioned earlier was outlined in Yes: 50 Scientifically Proven Ways to be Persuasive, a fascinating book written by Noah Goldstein, Steve Martin and Robert Cialdini.
Social scientists have found people have a greater affection for words and names that are easy to pronounce than those that are hard to pronounce.
But not everyone will find the same words easy to pronounce. For example, visitors to Australia often don’t know whether our famous beach’s name is pronounced Bond-ee or Bond-i.
That’s one of the many advantages of using Hunter & Scribe – there’s a native Australian at the helm who not only understands words, but also understands Australians.
Similarly, the persuasiveness of a handwritten message is influenced by the quality of the handwriting, just as the persuasiveness of a typed message is influenced by the readability of the font. The harder readers have to work to understand a message, the less likely they are to believe it.
At Hunter & Scribe, we work hard so our readers don’t have to.
If we wrote a social media post for a mortgage broker, we would not tell their clients to leverage their property’s LVR to avoid paying LMI on another property – because clients wouldn’t understand that kind of jargon. Instead, we’d tell them they could use their home’s equity to fund a 20% deposit on an investment property to avoid paying lender’s mortgage insurance.
Want to impress your clients with your ability to explain difficult concepts in plain English? Ask Hunter & Scribe for help.
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